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Saturday, April 13, 2013

Sumpa


By: Mikejuha
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Author's Note:
Heto sana ang entry ko sa MSOB Anthology Vol 2 ngunit mas nagustuhan ng mga editors ang entry kong "Santuwaryo" kung kaya heto, posted na rito.

Happy reading guys!

Mikejuha 

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14 comments:

  1. wowwwww...... isang kwentong nagpapaiyak at nagpapaligaya sa nagbabasa...
    ibang klase ka talaga mike

    thanks for the story

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  2. superb..napakaganda ng kwento..├Člove it..kinilig ako at pinaiyak ako ng story mo..superb tlaga..ang bait ng kua mateo mo at ni miguel..pnaiyak mo ko..lol

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  3. very very great story.. nakakaiyak at nakakaklig at syempre, nakaka-inspire talaga..

    ganda ng story kuya Mike..

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  4. galing nman neto kuya mike.. very good story!
    its like nanuod ako ng sine :)

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  5. Galing kuya Mike may pag fairy tale at true story. Kinspulutan ng aral sa buhay. Thanks for inspiring us to fight sa lahat ng trials sa buhay. Mabuhay ka!

    Randz of QC

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  6. Error lang ba yan. Hmm ba't si Mateo ang nakatuluyan e dba magkapatid sila.. hmmm edba dapat si Miguel ang dapat nyang makatuluyann.. hmm naguluhan lang po ako s'mike..

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  7. Tsk! Tsk! May mali nga ata rito. SiMiguel ang dapat na makatuluyan eh, Grrr. nahihilo lang. Tamad pa naman akong magbasa mulis amga nagawa ko na. grrrr... I correct ko na lang. sorry guys. nagkabaligtad ang sulat ko sa bandang ending ata... Nahihilo na naman ako hehehe. Haissst.

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  8. ..wow ganda ng story bk8 ba kc kelangan pang palabasin na patay na si mateo? Pero bongga ha pati nadala din sa flow ng story.!mateo i love you talaga.<3mua

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  9. Ang galing... mabilis ang transition ng bawat eksena kaya d nakakabore..

    Gawa ka pa.. ehehe galing mo...

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  10. grabe sobrang ganda kuya mike

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  11. Indeed a touching story which extinguished my boredom..
    More to come please.
    kudos to the writer

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  12. Indeed a very touching storry
    More to come please
    Kudos to the author

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  13. MSOB, especially Mike Juha never failed their readers, of course including me, to make good stories, really good ones.

    In this case/story, masasabi kong isang malaking coincidence ang nangyari sa tatlong characters. But nevertheless, maganda ang pagkakagawa nito. I really love this story.

    For sure, marami pa akong babasahin na mga stories dito. :)
    Thanks for inspiring, MSOB! :)


    PS.
    Pki-proofread po ng 2nd sentence ng 2nd to the last paragraph. Parang mali po ang "Mateo", I think it's "Miguel" or mali lang ang pagkakaintindi ko, hehe.

    ** Dums's **

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    1. Thanks Dums... already corrected. Nalito na rin ako hheehe. TC

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