tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6799550313409262486.post7235044097194963048..comments2024-01-23T03:25:13.235+08:00Comments on Michael's Shades of Blue: JUST FOR A MOMENT CHAPTER 20Mikejuhahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14494380351663129206noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6799550313409262486.post-36284040157645293432015-05-17T15:49:24.107+08:002015-05-17T15:49:24.107+08:00Sa first part kinikilig ako kay stephan at justin....Sa first part kinikilig ako kay stephan at justin.pero sumakit dibdib ko sa last part.huhuhu.<br /><br /><br />Alkwinz alvarezAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6799550313409262486.post-48128840717509641912015-05-14T03:41:04.630+08:002015-05-14T03:41:04.630+08:00Please tell me naman po sino yung nasa pic na gina...Please tell me naman po sino yung nasa pic na ginagamit nyo as Joseph, I think. Haha. Kamukha ng someone special sa kin. Haha. I know K-Pop artist sya. At di ako masyado familiar sa kanila. TIAAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6799550313409262486.post-91208688225166030422015-05-12T00:15:30.576+08:002015-05-12T00:15:30.576+08:00Edi wow sa comment.. Bat hindi ka nlang gumawa ng ...Edi wow sa comment.. Bat hindi ka nlang gumawa ng sarili mong story na maipost. Bka sakaling maging perfect. ^_^ (please dont take it the wrong way)<br /><br />darkwizard_hotzzAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6799550313409262486.post-11134105961181098702015-05-11T19:00:08.621+08:002015-05-11T19:00:08.621+08:00hmmm, more exciting for the next update! keepup th...hmmm, more exciting for the next update! keepup the good work!robert_mendoza94@yahoo.comhttp://www.yahoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6799550313409262486.post-77050699976533603622015-05-08T01:02:17.787+08:002015-05-08T01:02:17.787+08:00I agree with Edward especially with the POVs na wa...I agree with Edward especially with the POVs na wala masyadong pinagkaiba and there are some parts of the story na "too much" I mean maganda yung variations of emotions very colorful pero there are some parts of the story na pigang piga na parang ang dry na. And I hope din sana hindi masyadong predictable yung mga next chapters. Kasi kung napaka complex na nung story marami ng mapaglalaruan na plots wag masyadong teleserye. As a whole maganda pa rin naman. Masusurvive pa. ^_^YoungDChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17198011200480243593noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6799550313409262486.post-25155000224946318792015-05-07T23:01:55.577+08:002015-05-07T23:01:55.577+08:00I Like the Body Shot part. Medyo ang wild lang ni ...I Like the Body Shot part. Medyo ang wild lang ni Joseph, Jonas, Paul at Daryl. Si Franz expected na yun eh...haha. Tapos ang kulit ni Erika at Thomas. Pa-virgin naman si Ren, Geo at Nicko. Maganda na yung part na yun ang umpisa ng chapter kasi Light at hindi mo maiisip na sa middle at latter part pala magiging mabigat na yung mga eksena. Yung last part ang talagang mabigat, Hindi kasi agad nakuha ni Chris yung sinabi sa kanya ni Daryl. Dapat wag niyang damdamin yung mga sinabi ni Joseph at intindihin niya na lang muna dahil sa sitwasyon nila. Aba si Pagong bumibitaw din ng linya...haha. Nice one Pagong. Sigurado magkaka-ayos din ang JoChris. Pero teka author balik tayo sa body shot scene, bakit wala sila Blue at Aldred dun? Di ba kasama sila nung umalis sa party at pumunta dun? Nawala sila bigla...haha. ANyway, ang ganda ng chapter na ito. Great Job Author.<br /><br />- LantisAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6799550313409262486.post-81401856439071750052015-05-07T18:29:26.717+08:002015-05-07T18:29:26.717+08:00Nice, mixed emotions ganda ng story, mukhang matin...Nice, mixed emotions ganda ng story, mukhang matindi ang next chapter, keep it up author! Galing!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6799550313409262486.post-81884229737133869912015-05-07T11:52:59.180+08:002015-05-07T11:52:59.180+08:00Grabe ka nmn sir alex ur so mean .. Napatawa tlga ...Grabe ka nmn sir alex ur so mean .. Napatawa tlga ako dun sa eksena ng body shot ni ren and chris sobrang dami kong twa with sounds.lol .tpos intense nmn yung moment ng mga harris with chris..whooooh..and mdyo nsktan ako dun sa momemtum nung mommy ni chris to joseph until joseph to chris ...pero for me my point si darryl to chris..let see what will happen next.. Superb na superb..mix emotion..hehewahhhhhhwah mwahhh author blue..Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07671616687577505323noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6799550313409262486.post-59899540621402808562015-05-07T11:52:33.807+08:002015-05-07T11:52:33.807+08:00Grabe ka nmn sir alex ur so mean .. Napatawa tlga ...Grabe ka nmn sir alex ur so mean .. Napatawa tlga ako dun sa eksena ng body shot ni ren and chris sobrang dami kong twa with sounds.lol .tpos intense nmn yung moment ng mga harris with chris..whooooh..and mdyo nsktan ako dun sa momemtum nung mommy ni chris to joseph until joseph to chris ...pero for me my point si darryl to chris..let see what will happen next.. Superb na superb..mix emotion..hehewahhhhhhwah mwahhh author blue..Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07671616687577505323noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6799550313409262486.post-9848545525917945752015-05-07T08:06:03.167+08:002015-05-07T08:06:03.167+08:00Mabigat itong episode na to. Ang galing mo Mr Auth...Mabigat itong episode na to. Ang galing mo Mr Author. Salamat sa update. Take care.Alfred of T. O.noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6799550313409262486.post-52059491097211661202015-05-07T07:41:50.582+08:002015-05-07T07:41:50.582+08:00Hmmmm....mukang si ren ang madaming alam a...kawaw...Hmmmm....mukang si ren ang madaming alam a...kawawa nanaman si chrs..tsk tsk tsk....next pls....Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07555606021946178448noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6799550313409262486.post-50911385265903948362015-05-07T07:03:53.285+08:002015-05-07T07:03:53.285+08:00Hi. This is one of the stories na inaabangan ko sa...Hi. This is one of the stories na inaabangan ko sa site na ito. And it has come a long way, when it started it was focused on chris and joseph's story, ngayon ang dami nang characters. I specifically like the interactions between thomas and stephan. Most of the kilig went to their story as chris/joseph's become more stable. Please allow me some comments on some, i think, sore points ( please dont' take it the wrong way, i like this story in general).<br />1. I usually skip the first few sentences in every chapter. I understand that its supposed to set the tone for the chapter but it feels laborious to read. It seems unnecessary since you also have character internalizations within the chapter.<br />2. Every (verbal) confrontation, regardless of which characters are involved, have awkward dialogue. May it be kristel, mr. Harris, or any of the protagonists they sound like an eskandalosang tsismosang bakla (sorry for the stereotype, dont know how to describe it better). Its acceptable for kristel or franz kasi ganun naman characterization nila. but mr. Harris, a successfully bussiness man? Im not saying its not possible, but the confrontation scene then sound like its from only one character instead of between two different people.<br />3. General polish sa grammar and spelling. Also, POV type story telling is great when there are vast differences between characters POV, pero there are instances na almost the same lang (between chris ang joseph, earlier chapters). Parang replay na lang.<br />That's all.<br />EdwardAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6799550313409262486.post-54991863744110020102015-05-07T05:30:58.107+08:002015-05-07T05:30:58.107+08:00Grabe ka kuya blue nadurog ang puso ko at napaluha...Grabe ka kuya blue nadurog ang puso ko at napaluha ako sa ginawa ni joseph ky chris na biglang bitawan niya ito sa ere at ni hindi man lang pinakinggan ang paliwanag ni chris...... <br /><br />Nkakaasar ka joseph sana lang sa ginawa mo ito maging handa ka sa kapalit ng aksyon mo na tuluyamg lumayo sayo ang forever at si chris sa ginawa mong pagtataboy sa kanya at sana si thomas skulls an niya lng ng pagmamahal si stephen kita naman ng care nito sa kanya ayaw lang umamin na mahal niya rin ito ndi matanggap ni thomas<br /><br /><br />JharzAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6799550313409262486.post-71020556750565048492015-05-07T01:35:26.377+08:002015-05-07T01:35:26.377+08:00waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa grabe intense na ng story naawa ...waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa grabe intense na ng story naawa ako kay cris @_@<br />Cnu kaya yang aulric na yan hmmmm interesting na sana mahaba pa tong story mo sir blue at sana magpa kipot c cris hanggang 10 chapters para bongga hahaha.... <br /><br /><br />More power sau author<br />Good health<br />More stories to come sana rin gamitin mo ung name ko as main char hahaha pangarap ko yun promise!!!!<br /><br /><br />I love you author mwah😊<br /><br /><br />Karl Rickson avid fan/silent reader 😉Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6799550313409262486.post-5136742413038658212015-05-06T23:48:11.266+08:002015-05-06T23:48:11.266+08:00The beat ka talaga .. Hahaha thou i know masakit y...The beat ka talaga .. Hahaha thou i know masakit yun for both of them but in time everything will be just fine and i wonder aino ba ang kaibigan ni ren na si aulric.. Dirty crazy games .. 😂😂😂👏👏👏👏👏Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00715691514753036847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6799550313409262486.post-74766843945619011152015-05-06T22:36:48.642+08:002015-05-06T22:36:48.642+08:00Grabe sobrang bigat ang sakit sa puso lalo na yung...Grabe sobrang bigat ang sakit sa puso lalo na yung mga sinasabi ni Joseph kay Chris :( tangina ang sakit talaga kawwawa naman si Chris :(( kailangan mag kaayos sila hindi pwede to!!!!!<br /><br />Naeexcite ako kanina kay Stepahn at Thomas pero nakakaawa din si Stephan umaasa sya na mamahalin siya ni Thomas pero sana mangyare yun!!! Pero ang sakit talaga nung kay Joseph at Chris haha di ako maka move on!!<br /><br />Hi authir!!! Thank u sa pag appreciate ng mga comment ko haha. Kaya 44 kasi fave number ko yung 4 kasi birthday ko saka monthsary namin nung ex ko nung straight pa aako!!! Jahaha eh ang pangit naman kung 4 lang kaya ginawa kong 44 para mabilis tandaan :)) and again gusto kong magpasalamat sayo sa napaka ganda at habang update nato. Grabe ka pinaiyak mo nanaman ako!! Haha well ganyan talaga pag magaling!!! Woooohhhhhh :)))<br /><br />-44<br />(P.S sarap na sarap ako sa body shot kaso kulang pa akala ko may sa d*ck hahaha)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com