tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6799550313409262486.post3154123960703862798..comments2024-01-23T03:25:13.235+08:00Comments on Michael's Shades of Blue: Perfect Two - Episode 1Mikejuhahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14494380351663129206noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6799550313409262486.post-89781104070136596312011-09-26T19:40:34.616+08:002011-09-26T19:40:34.616+08:00i can't say that your story is good in anyways...i can't say that your story is good in anyways because i think what yo introduced in this story is the song not the story! if you'll going to make a story, please see to it that your story will not be over powered by anything that has no co-relation to the story! i know that you played a song in random from your ipod-and put the lyrics on your story to make the story seem long-and that's it. next time, put some sense in your story for you not to be criticized! though i'm not saying that your story doesn't make sense coz i know that when the story progresses your story will a have a sense(ahahaha) what i'm saying is that, don't put something in your story that will be over shadowed by a mere song! kasi sa dinami dami na ng magaganda't de kalibreng mga storyang na ipo-post dito, sa tingin ko dapat ganon ka din! dapat sa simula palang, nagbigay ka na ng impresyong mapapa "WOW" mo kame! dapat talaga meron kang WOW factor :) hehehe<br /><br /><br />===> echos lang >.<<br /><br />nice work author! next chapter na para merong mabasa na naman! pantagal inip :D eheheheAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6799550313409262486.post-55792868236528869252011-09-26T17:27:53.151+08:002011-09-26T17:27:53.151+08:00Ahhahaha virgin vin ahahha...
i like the song.......Ahhahaha virgin vin ahahha...<br /><br />i like the song....<br /><br />-marsMarshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11363967584988992210noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6799550313409262486.post-17306513258801335752011-09-26T12:15:51.598+08:002011-09-26T12:15:51.598+08:00Nice intro :D we'll be waiting for the update ...Nice intro :D we'll be waiting for the update :DMArcnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6799550313409262486.post-88811013451618873092011-09-26T09:39:44.776+08:002011-09-26T09:39:44.776+08:00nagvibrate talaga sa pwet ha lol...
i like this o...nagvibrate talaga sa pwet ha lol...<br /><br />i like this one "Sixteen years old, virgin, at single (lol)..People here in NJ call me Marvin. My friends call me Vin.." kelangan talaga ipangalandakan na virgin? lol...<br /><br />i'm Arl 25 virgin and single lol...<br />hahaha :)Arlnoreply@blogger.com