tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6799550313409262486.post3039587594230072872..comments2024-01-23T03:25:13.235+08:00Comments on Michael's Shades of Blue: Dear Stranger (Chapter 3) - Love, Stranger Book 2Mikejuhahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14494380351663129206noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6799550313409262486.post-71049035226218253852015-12-29T18:33:17.591+08:002015-12-29T18:33:17.591+08:00-RavePriss-RavePrissAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14025142921258115041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6799550313409262486.post-28169403621865642862015-12-29T18:32:40.826+08:002015-12-29T18:32:40.826+08:00Bakit b nung isang arw ko lng sinimulan basahin to...Bakit b nung isang arw ko lng sinimulan basahin to,. Pero ok lng dn kasi dire-diretso ko mababasa yung mga updates, haha<br /><br />Nagconment na ko Sir White_Pal kasi nakakatuwa tong chapter na'to. Nakaktuwa ung reactions ni Ray, pati rn yung k Chichi na parang my alam sya tungkol kina Rome at Ray, haha.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14025142921258115041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6799550313409262486.post-80459562185642032322015-11-30T08:21:35.121+08:002015-11-30T08:21:35.121+08:00Thanks for reading and sa feedback LSDee!
Totoo ni...Thanks for reading and sa feedback LSDee!<br />Totoo niyan talagang ingat na ingat ako sa chapter na ito at nagspend ako ng masmahabang oras para rito. Isa po kasi ito sa highlights ng story eh since ito yung official na unang pagkikita nila ulit.<br />Mamaya na po ang Chapter 4. :-)White_Palhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07334715951076861982noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6799550313409262486.post-85543172442941905672015-11-30T00:00:45.746+08:002015-11-30T00:00:45.746+08:00ang ganda ng execution ng conversation...
no dull ...ang ganda ng execution ng conversation...<br />no dull moments and i find it very realistic...<br />kakilig and i love it!<br />kudos to whitepal and im luking forward for an update...<br /><br />super thanks for mking me believe in forever...<br />i TRUST you...<br /><br />#LSDeeAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6799550313409262486.post-77214074728105914032015-11-29T18:42:30.226+08:002015-11-29T18:42:30.226+08:00Thanks for reading!
I'll try to update tonigh...Thanks for reading! <br />I'll try to update tonight. Kakauwi ko lang po eh. Have a great day! ^_^White_Palhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07334715951076861982noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6799550313409262486.post-10791190553958332015-11-29T10:40:06.500+08:002015-11-29T10:40:06.500+08:00Grabe ang pagkikita ng dalawa kaso my malaking had...Grabe ang pagkikita ng dalawa kaso my malaking hadlang sa kanilng dalawa sana matunaw ito ng pagmamahalan nila<br /><br />JharZAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6799550313409262486.post-32971244558112896722015-11-29T06:29:43.283+08:002015-11-29T06:29:43.283+08:00Thanks for reading Ar.
Ano pong meron? What's ...Thanks for reading Ar.<br />Ano pong meron? What's with the name? Hehe. Actually May / June ko pa naisip ang mga pangalan ni Rome at Ray and I'm thinking to change their surname's din kasi matagal pa ang Book2, but during that time wala talaga ako maisip na iba. Pangit po ba? (Please be honest maaapprecite ko 'yun)<br />I want to hear your opinion and your side po, medyo naintriga ako sa comment mo. Hehehe. Ano rin yung sinabi mong nakakamiss? Ang alin po?<br />Hope magreply po kayo, :-)White_Palhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07334715951076861982noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6799550313409262486.post-83995580164191340972015-11-29T06:26:06.153+08:002015-11-29T06:26:06.153+08:00Thanks Zefyr. :-)
Actually agree ako 'dun sa k...Thanks Zefyr. :-)<br />Actually agree ako 'dun sa kailangan kong iimprove. Medyo mahirap sa akin ang bagay na iyan or in technical terms eh "imagery" kasi bilang mambabasa ng mga nakakahiligan kong libro, I use my imagination sa mga ibang bagay na hindi nakalagay sa libro. So pag writer mode on na ako, it's hard for me to put all the details or do over detailing, ayokong ibigay sa inyo lahat kasi gusto ko makita niyo rin sa sarili niyong point of view. Hehehe. Anyway, I'll try to improve it pa rin naman, tingnan ko kung ano magagawa ko. Hehe.<br />Salamat uli!White_Palhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07334715951076861982noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6799550313409262486.post-52674846324139799522015-11-28T17:46:27.796+08:002015-11-28T17:46:27.796+08:00Rome Parilla ahahah!
nice one!!!! :)
nakakamiss! :...Rome Parilla ahahah!<br />nice one!!!! :)<br />nakakamiss! :)<br />-arAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6799550313409262486.post-28901227266127675632015-11-28T12:06:48.297+08:002015-11-28T12:06:48.297+08:004-5 years mo na akong reader since "Love Me L...4-5 years mo na akong reader since "Love Me Like I Am" days. And I would say that you showed a lot of growth and improvement in your craft. You're not perfect, all your reader knows that but the strength that you showed in this chapter is amazing. Iba ka sa ibang writer Gab, you know how to play with your characters and your characters is cooperating with you that's why the output of your story is great. That is rare talent! At first, I'm thinking kung ano ang specialty mo as a writer and I think this is it. Your characters is your strength.<br /><br />I love the scene where they first met after one year, and of course I love how you execute the last scene, it's my favorite in the whole story kahit hindi sila magkasama kasi kahit magkalayo sila ramdam mo yung connection nila.<br /><br />The story is good as it is, but if you will ask me the points of improvement, I think it’s the details and ambiance of the place. The good thing is, hindi na ito halata kasi napakaganda ng pagkakalahad ng thoughts ni Rome at Ray. Besides I'm not the kind of reader who's after these things. Mas gusto kong mabasa ang tungkol sa story at characters.<br /><br />- ZefyrZefyrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11506940660462448799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6799550313409262486.post-30116808762226959892015-11-28T08:22:01.914+08:002015-11-28T08:22:01.914+08:00Thanks for reading! Comment ka lang po ng comment ...Thanks for reading! Comment ka lang po ng comment kasi pwedeng makatulong iyan para maimprove ko ang pagsusulat ko. Lalo na irerelease ko ito sa eBook sa BUQO. :-DWhite_Palhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07334715951076861982noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6799550313409262486.post-30308367823015271912015-11-28T08:21:52.629+08:002015-11-28T08:21:52.629+08:00Thanks for reading! Comment ka lang po ng comment ...Thanks for reading! Comment ka lang po ng comment kasi pwedeng makatulong iyan para maimprove ko ang pagsusulat ko. Lalo na irerelease ko ito sa eBook sa BUQO. :-DWhite_Palhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07334715951076861982noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6799550313409262486.post-20674412130378972692015-11-28T08:20:04.934+08:002015-11-28T08:20:04.934+08:00Salamat. Masmaganda rin sana kung bawat chapters m...Salamat. Masmaganda rin sana kung bawat chapters may mga feedbacks and suggestion kung papaano maiimprove ang pagsusulat ko. (except the plot kasi naka-set na ang ending eh)<br />Thanks for reading. ^_^White_Palhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07334715951076861982noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6799550313409262486.post-32502560910720385032015-11-28T08:18:04.390+08:002015-11-28T08:18:04.390+08:00Ako rin kinilig nung sinusulat ko 'yan. Hahaha...Ako rin kinilig nung sinusulat ko 'yan. Hahaha! <3 <br />Thanks for reading. Take care. ^_^White_Palhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07334715951076861982noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6799550313409262486.post-55938931636623606932015-11-28T08:17:08.513+08:002015-11-28T08:17:08.513+08:00Thanks sa compliment. Masaya akong nagustuhan mo. ...Thanks sa compliment. Masaya akong nagustuhan mo. <br />Thanks for reading! :-)White_Palhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07334715951076861982noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6799550313409262486.post-9604668717986720662015-11-28T08:16:17.330+08:002015-11-28T08:16:17.330+08:00Next week pa 'yan. Chapter 4 muna. Thanks for ...Next week pa 'yan. Chapter 4 muna. Thanks for reading.White_Palhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07334715951076861982noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6799550313409262486.post-8942733331882765132015-11-28T00:31:44.104+08:002015-11-28T00:31:44.104+08:00Wow as in wow, npkalaki ng imorovement from the 1s...Wow as in wow, npkalaki ng imorovement from the 1st book, ang galing ng sequence and humaba na din sya, i appreciate you trying to listen to your readers suggestions and feedback and apply them in your work, that is a sign that you are a good author, keep it up.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6799550313409262486.post-26735813531216837132015-11-27T23:48:16.777+08:002015-11-27T23:48:16.777+08:00Killig pa more ♥♥♥♥Killig pa more ♥♥♥♥Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6799550313409262486.post-27123289733197098622015-11-27T22:03:10.682+08:002015-11-27T22:03:10.682+08:00I will probably like this more than the First one....I will probably like this more than the First one.. Nice story.. Hopefully, the ending will be nice too.. No more sad endings please.. Very good narrative and concept!.. Keep up the good work author..Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6799550313409262486.post-48051350254550458532015-11-27T14:03:47.428+08:002015-11-27T14:03:47.428+08:00Silent reader ako. Pero hindi ko napigilan mag-iwa...Silent reader ako. Pero hindi ko napigilan mag-iwan ng comment dahil napakaganda ng chapter. I like how the author write Ray when he saw Rome again. But what I like the most is the kwarto scene. Iba ang pagkakasulat nito kumpara sa mga nabasa ko dati. Simple story but extraordinary execution.<br /><br />Looking forward to the next chapter. Kudos whitepal!Jericnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6799550313409262486.post-71758273963814006752015-11-27T14:03:16.603+08:002015-11-27T14:03:16.603+08:00Silent reader ako. Pero hindi ko napigilan mag-iwa...Silent reader ako. Pero hindi ko napigilan mag-iwan ng comment dahil napakaganda ng chapter. I like how the author write Ray when he saw Rome again. But what I like the most is the kwarto scene. Iba ang pagkakasulat nito kumpara sa mga nabasa ko dati. Simple story but extraordinary execution.<br /><br />Looking forward to the next chapter. Kudos whitepal!Jericnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6799550313409262486.post-88922936385928265072015-11-27T08:28:01.194+08:002015-11-27T08:28:01.194+08:00Comments and suggestions are welcome! Maraming sal...Comments and suggestions are welcome! Maraming salamat po! :-)White_Palhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07334715951076861982noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6799550313409262486.post-86529302962055908522015-11-26T23:20:34.259+08:002015-11-26T23:20:34.259+08:00Chapter 6 naChapter 6 naAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6799550313409262486.post-24646055072052502642015-11-26T18:47:51.205+08:002015-11-26T18:47:51.205+08:00This comment has been removed by the author.White_Palhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07334715951076861982noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6799550313409262486.post-38844787189379164902015-11-26T18:45:38.925+08:002015-11-26T18:45:38.925+08:00Thanks for reading in advance!
This weekend ang Ch...Thanks for reading in advance!<br />This weekend ang Chapter 4. I hope nagustuhan niyo ang muling pagkikita ni Rome at Ray. ^_^White_Palhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07334715951076861982noreply@blogger.com